The Big Idea
Okay. So youve figured out that you would like to
write for magazines, newspapers, and e-zines. Unfortunately, so have
about eight gazillion other people on this planet. Therefore, you have
to stand out from the crowd. You have to sparkle. How do you do this?
Simple. It all starts with The Big Idea. The first secret you must
learn in this funny business is that you dont actually have to write
the whole article to get a job. In fact, only bright green novices
attempt to write the whole thing before selling it. What you do need,
however, is the IDEA for the great story. You will use this great idea
to convince editors to pay you exorbitant amounts of money via a
proposal letter (called a query letter. But youll learn about that in a
minute).
So, where will you find this Big Idea? Well, youve
heard that wise adage write what you know. Thats a wonderful mantra for
finding your jumping-off point. You dont need to stick to what you know
for the specific focus of your story, but tap into your already huge
vat of knowledge to find the storys basis. This is how you will become
an expert. Experts are in demand. People with stories arent. What you
have to do is sneak your stories into your areas of expertise. Example:
lets say your hobbies and interests include fishing, watching talk
shows, and traveling. Good! You are a potential expert in those areas.
Jot these things down. Now comes the fun part: brainstorming.
The biggest mistake you can make in pitching your
story is being too general. Never, ever send a letter to the editor
suggesting an article about fishing. Not even an article about fishing
in Florida. This vagueness is not appropriate for short writing. In
general, you will be expected to write somewhere between 800 and 2000
words on your topic. You couldnt possibly tell us all about fishing in
2000 words. What you could do, however, is give us a comparison of
twelve different lures used to catch sailfish. Or the pros and cons of
joining a fishing club. Or even how the moon can tell you if itll be a
good fishing day.
So heres your first assignment. Get out your
trusty notebook. (If you dont have one, stop reading and get one. Right
now.) On the first page, write down a list of any and all topics that
interest you. Its okay to be general here. Need some ideas to get you
started?
Think through your whole day. Dont neglect
anything. What do you do from the moment you wake up until the moment
you fall asleep? You turn off your alarm clock. (An article about alarm
clocks disrupting valuable sleep stages! Or waking up to music versus
waking up to that annoying beeping sound. Or the optimal number of
times to press the snooze button.) You brush your teeth. (Article: What
all those touted ingredientsfluoride, peroxide, baking sodareally do
for your teeth.) You take a shower. Maybe with your significant other.
Lucky you. (Romantic showers for two.)
Moving on. You go to work. This is the most
obvious area of expertise. Lets say youre a secretary. How ergonomic
office equipment can save you from Carpal Tunnel Syndrome, an achy
back, and a stiff neck. How to avoid screaming at your boss when hes a
total idiot. Five couples (or ex-couples) share their wisdom about
dating in the office. Think about what cover story would entice you to
pay three dollars for a magazine. You dont have to have the knowledge
to actually write the article yet. You just have to know you can get
this information later.
Next, you come home. What happens? Do you have
kids? Great! A wealth of article ideas. You could write about childcare
agencies, potty training, decoding teenage slang, teaching table
manners youre getting the idea now, right? Run with it!
Write at least one page of general topics that
interest you, then weed out the most interesting ones. Narrow it down
to three or four. Then write those three or four topics on top of brand
new pages. Now fill up those pages with specific article angles. Just
write. Dont edit yourself. Dont judge. Just write whatever pops into
your head. If you need motivation, play it like a game of
Scattergories. Set a timer for ten minutes. See how many ideas you can
jot down before the timer sounds.
Keep in mind that there are markets for almost any
conceivable topic. Dont limit yourself to the headlines youd read in
Vogue and Good Housekeeping. Between newspapers, consumer magazines,
trade magazines, e-zines, tabloids, literary journals, and more, youre
bound to find an appropriate publication for your Big Idea.
You want to know more about these markets? Read
on!
Researching the Markets
First, youll need a few definitions:
Consumer Magazines: These typically pay the best.
These are the types of magazines you might find in a grocery store
check-out line, convenience store, in your airplane seat pocket, or
your doctors office. Types of consumer mags: mens, womens, special
interest, inflight, teens, school/career, travel, health,
ethnic/minority, political, entertainment, romance, religious, etc.
This is the area most writers try to break into.
Literary Magazines: These dont pay much, if at
all. However, what they lack in moolah, they make up for in prestige.
If youre looking to jump-start your career as a fiction writer or poet,
your best chance at recognition may come in the form of one of these
small publications. Often published by colleges and universities, their
circulation is usually regional and low. They generally seek scholarly
essays, intellectually challenging prose, poetry, and book reviews.
Publishers will be impressed if you succeed in placing your work in one
of the more prominent journals (Cimarron Review, Ploughshares, and
Story, for example).
Trade Journals: Pay varies greatly. Any
publication that focuses on a particular occupation/industry falls into
this category. This is where your expertise can shine. There are trade
journals for almost every line of work, from art dealers to truck
drivers. In general, your written eloquence is not as important as your
research and timely knowledge for these publications.
E-Zines: Pay varies greatly. Simply put, e-zines
are simply magazines on the Internet. The only major difference is that
articles for e-zines can usually run longer than print magazines. (No
printing costs, so space isnt as important an issue for e-zine
editors.) Most e-zines dont pay (except by means of a byline) but this
trend is changing. The most popular sites (Lifetimetv.com
and Wired, for example) pay quite well. Topics stretch as wide as your
imagination.
Now that you know, learn how to contact them!
There are tons of ways to find markets that are
open to freelancers. If you were paying attention, you might notice
that this very website is looking for writers! Finding places to submit
your work is easy if you know where to look.
First, the most important tool in a freelancers
toolbox is The Writers Market. Available at any major bookstore, this
is an annual compilation of more than 2,000 magazines, 1,000 book
publishers, and even specialized markets like greeting cards, script
writing, and syndicates.
The next best tools are online. Lucky you! Theyre
free. Absolute Markets is a weekly e-zine filled with market
guidelines, contest listings, and marketing tips. Freelancing4Money
puts out a jam-packed e-zine filled with freelance opportunities.
Writer's Digest has a great, searchable database of markets. Writing
For Dollars has a biweekly newsletter with market guidelines, and a
searchable database on the website. And Writers Weekly lists calls for
writers and market guidelines each week.
You can even run a search for freelance writers on
any major search engine, and youre likely to come up with tons of
listings. Try specifying if possible; add words that fit your needs.
(Example: paying markets, romance, teen magazines.)
So, your next assignment is this: go back to your
trusty notebook and pick out your very favorite idea. That will now be
known as your Big Idea. Pick the markets that best fit your idea.
Choose several. Find out if you can get a free or discounted sample
copy. (Writers often can, if you specify that you would like to query
them in the future.) Request writers guidelines if available. Its
considered poor form to query publications that youve never read, or
know nothing about. Do your best to read at least one copy of whatever
magazine or journal you plan to query. Check your library for copies if
you prefer not to go broke researching.
Got it now? You have your idea, and youve found
places to submit it? Great! Then you'll need to learn proper protocol
for writing and submitting the Killer Query.
The Killer Query
The job of the query letter is to entice an editor
to say, Hey! Id be interested in learning more about that. Therefore,
you dont want to spill all your secrets and research yet. You want to
tease and tantalize. Now that youve got your fabulous Big Idea, your
job is to condense (or expand) that idea into two to three paragraphs.
To illustrate the components of a killer query,
here is an example of one of mine (using fictitious contact infosorry!)
that landed me the assignment:
Jenna Glatzer
(Always use proper formal letter format)
123 My Address
My City, State, Zip Code
(555) 555-5555
Mr. Joe Shmoe
(Make SURE to get a name of the appropriate department College Life 101
editor. Never address a letter to editor or submissions.)
123 Their Address
Their City, State, Zip Code
Todays Date, 2003
Dear Mr. Shmoe:
(Colons are used in formal letters. Commas are used in friendly
letters.)
Think company cars, expense accounts, and a
spacious office with bay windows. Who do you picture running a business
this successful?
(Start the letter with a zinger that captures the
essence of your proposed article/story. Raise a question that will
cause the reader to think, or give a visual image anything that will
make him/her want to read on and find out what youre talking about.)
Think again. This company was the brainchild of
three Boston University sophomores whose ambitions led them to thriving
careers before they had diplomas to hang on the wall.
(The rest of the first paragraph should give a
concise description of the focus of your proposed article. Remember to
tell why its appropriate to the publication youre querying. In this
case, I was targeting a college magazine, so I made sure to emphasize
the relevance to their subject matter early in the letter.)
Charles Strader, Richard Skelton, and Pablo Mondal
run Net One, an Internet Service Provider. The three met in the
freshmen dorms, then moved into an apartment together. Opportunity
knocked when Strader, who worked for the universitys computer center,
took a phone call from the owner of a hair salon. She sought help
designing a website; Strader volunteered, and Net One was born.
(Again, concisely, get a little deeper into the
content of the article. What is special about your story? In this case,
I wanted to emphasize that these guys were college buddies who started
a booming business by branching out from their humble beginning.)
Working closely with friends to build something we
believe in is Mondals favorite perk. Skelton agrees. We have great
trust in each other, and feel that were all in this together.
(Quotations arent necessary in a query, but its
nice to give something specific to show that you have done some
research into your topic, and that you have access to resources that
will enable you to write the article well. I wanted to show that I had
already spoken to these guysthey happen to be friends of mineand that
they would be upbeat and inspirational people to interview. You can
accomplish the same effect by including a few quirky facts or survey
results youve found out about your topic.)
Considering that their only capital was a computer
and a small loan from Straders father, the guys feel very successful.
Were not millionaires, but we have goals, and were following them, says
Skelton. I think thats true success. By any definition, Net Ones roster
of more than 50 clients ranging from colleges to Fortune 500 companies
attests to their hard work and talent.
(Look, editor. These guys are big up-and-comers!
Notice I mentioned Fortune 500 companies. This lets the editor know
quickly that these college guys arent small potatoes. It neatly ties up
the opening sentence, which promised an article about guys who have a
spacious office, expense accounts, and company car. Now the editor has
a reason to believe that these guys actually are that successful.)
I propose a 1,000 word profile for your Students
At Work section.
(Shows Ive researched their magazine. I know which
section this should fit, and Ive read their guidelines to determine an
appropriate word count.)
I am a full-time freelance writer, and my works
have been recently featured in such publications as 201 Magazine,
College Bound
(Notice I mention the most relevant magazines
first. Anything youve had published that might relate to the content,
tone, or audience of the proposed publication belongs here.)
Bliss!, Working Women, and Video Librarian. Clips
are enclosed.
(If youve never had anything published, dont
distress. Just shut up about it. Do NOT tell anyone, Though Ive never
been published yet, Im a real go-getter. Less is more. If you keep
quiet, they may not even think about the fact that you didnt mention
your credits. Also, do not get into a diatribe describing how you
edited your high school newspaper. Just a quick list of relevant
writing background. See below for info about clips.)
I can provide documentation and interview notes
for easy fact-checking, and could submit the completed article within
two weeks.
(Optional. Some people like to suggest a time
frame, others let the editor do it. In general, the editor will tell
you when the article is due, regardless of your preferences. Its a nice
touch to mention how you will research your article. Mine was primarily
dependent on interviews, but you may wish to include the names of
journals/experts you plan to quote or use for information.)
I look forward to your response.
(Obligatory polite ending. Use any variation you
wish. No pleading. If you dare type, I promise to write a reallllly,
realllly good article! Please hire me!, you will incur my wrath. I will
hunt you down and yell at you. A lot. Just a simple, dignified ending
requesting a response.)
Regards,
Jenna Glatzer
(Oh. Substitute your name and preferred signature
ending. Unless you feel like sending your paycheck to me, in which
case, you can feel free to use my name. Grin.)
Finally, clips! If youve had anything publishedor
even if you havent, but you have a few good writing samples appropriate
for this type of marketinclude them. These samples are called clips,
and they are used to show the editor that you are an intelligent,
insightful, funny, clever, and/or excellent writer. Photocopy your
articles straight from the publication. Just 2-3 clips.
When you're sending queries by e-mail, you can
paste the text of your clips into the body of the e-mail (never as an
attachment!), or you can direct the editor to one or two website URLs
where she can view your articles.
Interviews and Profiles
I know, you feel weird about this one, right?
Youre uncomfortable calling someone or visiting a business to ask a
professional to take precious time out of their day to help you
research your article.
Well, buck up, little camper, because most
professionals absolutely love to be interviewed. They jump at the
chance, for a few reasons. These are the reasons to keep in mind when
you feel small and silly for asking:
- It shows you respect their opinion and/or job.
- It gives them opportunities for publicity of
their business.
- It gives them the chance to brag to friends
that they are quoted in a magazine.
- It gives them something to frame and show
clients.
- Finally, someone is recognizing their genius
and taking an interest in their work.
- Theyre usually wannabe writers, anyway, and
they will be just as happy to pick your brain to find out how you got
the job.
Before you approach experts:
Make sure you already have your questions mapped
out, at least briefly. What exactly do you need to know from this
person? What could this person tell you that no one else can? Avoid yes
or no questions. Ask open-ended questions that could lead to lengthy
responses chock full of great quotes. Also, have a synopsis of your
planned article ready, so you can tell your expert what youre writing
and how they can supplement your knowledge.
How to approach experts:
Get on the phone. Have your idea condensed into
2-3 sentences, so you can quickly explain yourself to whomever answers
the phone.
Hello. My name is Jenna, and Im writing an article
about the rise in vegetarianism among young women in Nevada for Youth
In Nevada Magazine. I know Dr. Spuds is a well-respected nutritionist,
and Im hoping she would be willing to answer a few questions on this
subject.
At this point, the secretary will say, Hold, and
make you listen to elevator musak while she summons the boss. Or shell
take down your number and have Dr. Spuds call you back. Or it will be
Dr. Spuds herself, and shell say, What do you want to know?
Your options at this point are (1) Ask questions
over the phone, right then and there. Make sure you check to make sure
your expert is not pressed for time before you begin. (2) Set up a
phone date to conduct the interview. (3) Ask if you can meet in person.
This is goodalmost necessaryif the person will be the focus of your
article. If the person is being used just to add a few quotes, you dont
have to meet in person, because its unlikely youll ever need to write,
Dr. Spuds wrinkled her brow and stared into her pea soup as she
explained that young women are becoming more health-conscious. (4)
Trade e-mail addresses and send over a list of questions. This approach
isnt usually the best, because it doesnt allow you to react to, and
build from, information you gain in answers to previous questions.
However, if the publication will not reimburse you for long distance
phone calls, and you have to conduct a lengthy interview, e-mail
exchanges are acceptable. Just make ! sure you specify a due date for
the responses. Be reasonabletry to give the expert a week to answer all
your questions.
The Sales
Okay, you sent out your killer query, and you got
a phone call from an editor with the big news: you got the assignment!
Congratulations, you! Go on and do a little dance of joy, then crash
back to reality with your new mantra: GET IT IN WRITING. Make sure the
editor tells you that a written contract is forthcoming in the near
future.
If youve researched your market, you probably
already have an idea of the pay rate, but be sure to cover this ground
in that initial phone call if the editor fails to mention it. Important
things to remember:
On Publication vs. On Acceptance
You not only need to know how much youll be paid,
but also, when youll be paid. Many markets want to pay you on
publication. This can be a problem, because many magazines and journals
have long lead times. (Translation: a long time between when they
assign you the article and when it actually ends up in print.) If you
write an article in January, and it doesnt get published until
November, you probably wont see a check until December. Do you want to
wait a year to get paid? Can you wait that long? This is a point you
absolutely can negotiate. Ask for payment on acceptance. If this is
refused, it gives you a little leverage to work with on the other
issues, which are
Kill Fees
If you get the assignment, and, for whatever
reason, an editor decides not to print your article, you can negotiate
for a kill fee. This is a percentage of the sale price. If you are
offered $200 to write an article, you may get a $50 kill fee. Its a
well known fact that big publications kill articles all the time. Some
editors admit to assigning 10-20% more than they could ever fit in the
magazine. They do this so they can pick and choose from the final
products, or so they can see how things fit once the layout is
complete. Some articles will be pushed back to other issues, and some
will just be trashed.
Bios
We like them. Those are the little blurbs that
often follow an article, giving short biographical information about
the writer, and sometimes an e-mail address or phone number. Ask for
one if you can.
Sidebars and Photos
Those are the little factoids or columns that rest
next to the main article. For example, in an article about exercise,
youll often see a little chart on the side that tells how many calories
are burned by doing specific exercises (riding a bike, climbing a hill,
etc.). If you can suggest sidebars, you can often get extra pay. Same
goes for photos. If youve got a decent camera and a good eye, offer
photos for a few extra bucks.
To Spec or Not To Spec
Especially as a novice writer, youll sometimes get
asked to write an article on speculation. This means that youll have to
write the whole article and submit it without a contract, or any
promise of payment. Its a bone of contention among professional
writers, because almost no other field works this way. Its never do the
job, and then Ill decide if I feel like paying you. Only in this crazy
business. Harrumph.
That said, I advise you to take spec assignments
in the beginning. Once youre established, you shouldnt need to do this,
but in order to build up your resume and your clips, you need to get
published. So go ahead and submit on spec, and go ahead and do a few
free/nearly free pieces for the experience.
Before submitting anything, though, make sure you
know in advance what the terms will be if the editor does use your
piece. How much will you be paid? What rights will they buy?
Even many of the big markets have adopted the
practice of requesting pieces on spec. They do this because they can
get away with it. Because there are thousands of wannabe writers out
there who will beg, borrow, and steal for the chance to be published.
So, if you want to compete, sometimes youll have to suck it up and
accept this. Once the publication accepts one of your spec pieces,
youll be a much more likely candidate for an outright assignment next
time.
Rights to Write
There are several kinds of rights a publication
may buy:
First North American Serial RightsThe newspaper or
magazine has the right to publish this piece for the first time in any
periodical. All other rights belong to the writer.
One-Time RightsThe publication buys the
nonexclusive right to publish the piece once. The writer can sell the
same article to other publications simultaneously.
Second Serial Rights (or Reprint Rights)Also
nonexclusive. Gives the publication the right to reprint an article
that has appeared elsewhere.
Electronic RightsCovers CD-ROMs, e-zines, website
content, games, etc. Get in writing which electronic rights are
specified-- First Electronic Rights, archiving rights, etc. Most
publications ask for the right to archive "indefinitely." You can try
to negotiate for a fixed term (i.e., archiving rights for six months).
All RightsPretty self-explanatory. You can never
sell this piece to anyone else again. Try to avoid this one. Most
publications ask for First Serial Rights.
Work-For-Hire Rights-- The publication has come up
with the idea and assigned it to you, and they will own it, lock,
stock, and barrel. They own the copyright and don't even have to give
you credit. It may be sliced, diced, repackaged, re-sold, etc., and you
won't have any claim to it beyond what you were originally paid.
TV/Motion Picture RightsAlso self-explanatory.
Almost always exclusive.
Recycling Your Big Ideas
This is the bread and butter of freelance writing.
Its also called re-slanting. Once youve got the Big Idea, dont waste it
by only using it once. Use the information youve gathered and come up
with off-shoot ideas. Slant it to appeal to different markets.
Youre afraid because of the issue of rights that
we just discussed, right? (No pun intended.) Well, you have nothing to
fear, provided the new article is sufficiently different in content and
intended audience. If youve managed to sell your article to a major
national magazine, it is considered poor form to try to sell a
re-slanted version to another national magazine.
However, if youre dealing with regional,
specialized, or small publications, there should be very little overlap
of intended audience. Therefore, an editor from Alabama Aristocrats
would probably never know if you sold a re-slanted version of your
piece to Guitarists Today. Even if they did know, they almost certainly
would not care.
It is standard and accepted practice, for the
simple reason that it is darn difficult to make a living as a writer.
If you have the choice between making $100 for selling your piece to
one small publication, or making $1000 by selling altered versions to
eight different small publications, which would you choose?
Re-slanting an article is easy, since youve
already done the bulk of the research. Scrounge up a few new quotes,
and use the information you left out of the first article. Focus it on
the new desired market.
For example, I could sell an article about the
health benefits of meditation to a fitness magazine. A few alterations,
and that same article becomes Religions Encouraging Meditation for my
local newspapers Society pages. Then it becomes Meditation Makes You
Smarter for the college market. Then, Meditate Your Stress Away for a
working womans magazine. And I didnt even mention all those new
age/holistic publications. What a field day!
With just a few more questions posed to your
trusted experts, youve got a whole new article. And, look! Youre
becoming an expert yourself. This is how you begin to find your nichea
few specific subjects that you feel comfortable writing about. Ah, soon
those journalists will be coming to YOU with their questions.
"The Extras"
Once youve gotten a few assignments, and feel that
youve really embarked on this as a potential career (or just a
part-time income-booster), youll want to think about the little extras.
A nice touch: get yourself some nice letterhead.
Splurge a little with your second or third paycheck and invest in
professionally printed letterhead. Presentation does count when
submitting your correspondence to an editor. Avoid cutesy clip art of
quill pens and inkwells.
Also, an invoice. You should always include an
invoice with your completed article. Often, the person you submit the
story to is not the same person in charge of sending you a paycheck. By
including an invoice, you can be reasonably assured that the billing
department will have a record of what terms were agreed upon, and when
they are supposed to pay you.
Receipts: Hold onto your postage receipts and your
writing-related supplies. If writing is your profession, then these can
be tax write-offs. Also, if you are able to negotiate it, editors will
often reimburse you for any expenses you incur while on assignment once
you are an established writer. Submit your phone bill (with the
reimbursable call/s circled), your book receipts, your travel expense
receipts, etc. along with your invoice. Make sure these terms are
specified in your contract.
Youre ready? Good! Get out there and get 'em,
slugger. Good luck!
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About The Author
Jenna Glatzer is the author of MAKE A REAL
LIVING AS A FREELANCE WRITER, which comes with a FREE editors' cheat
sheet directory! Check it out at www.jennaglatzer.com.
She's also the editor-in-chief of www.absolutewrite.com,
the most popular online magazine for writers.
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This article was posted on July 31, 2004
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